Should I focus more on the or the on-stage performance ?
He paused, letting the silence stretch until it became uncomfortable, then unbearable, then—briefly—profound. Stewart Lee's Comedy Vehicle
Back on stage, Stewart stood up, brushed off his suit, and looked directly into the lens. He dismantled the joke he had just told, explaining why it wasn't funny, why the audience’s laughter was "the wrong kind of laughter," and how the very concept of a television comedy vehicle was a hollow vessel for the death of British culture. Should I focus more on the or the on-stage performance
The red light of the camera glowed like a judgmental eye. Stewart Lee stood center stage, his posture slumped in a way that suggested he was physically burdened by the sheer existence of his audience. He dismantled the joke he had just told,
"Perfect," the director replied. "Cut to a close-up of a middle-aged man in the third row looking slightly confused. That’s the 'Vehicle' brand."