Recommended Comments Guide

"Moving forward, think about how this point connects back to your main argument."

Focus on reinforcing what they did well while giving clear directions for improvement. "This is a very well-thought-out argument!" "You express your ideas so well in this section." "I love how you’ve used vivid language choices here." Constructive Critique: Recommended Comments

"The difficulty with this section is that it does not develop a clearly expressed thesis." "Moving forward, think about how this point connects

"There is a bit too much plot summary here; try to focus more on your own analysis." Recommended Comments