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The screen went black. A text prompt appeared at the bottom of the player: “Your turn.” Elias heard a soft click from the hallway behind him. The door to his own study—the one he’d locked an hour ago—was slowly beginning to creak open. How to Draft Your Own Story

Don't just look at the big action; look for the details. Is there a specific object? A change in light? According to DailyMotion's writing guide , adding sensory details helps readers visualize the scene. g60603.mp4

He double-clicked. The player opened to a grain, gray-scaled shot of a hallway he didn't recognize. The camera moved with a heavy, rhythmic breathing, swaying slightly as it passed rows of identical steel doors. The screen went black