Falling Falling Link

"Still falling," Elias confirmed, tucking a ration bar into his helmet’s feed-slot. "The altimeter on my suit just stopped. I think I’ve passed the troposphere."

"The air is getting cold, Sarah," Elias whispered. He watched the crystals of ice begin to form on the edges of his visor. Falling Falling

Inside, he found a tin of emergency rations and a handheld radio. He clicked it on, the static popping like distant gunfire. "Still falling," Elias confirmed, tucking a ration bar

He wasn't falling anymore. He was flying. He just hadn't reached the stars yet. " Elias confirmed

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