Should the story focus more on or the party atmosphere ?
Elias pulled a small, worn notebook from his pocket. On the first page of the new year, he didn't write a long list of resolutions. Instead, he wrote one word in bold, gold ink:
The clock tower in the center of the city hummed with a heavy, rhythmic pulse, counting down the final seconds of December. On the top floor of a nearby high-rise, Elias stood by the floor-to-ceiling windows, his reflection caught in the dark glass. Behind him, the party was a blur of gold confetti and soft jazz, but his eyes were fixed on the horizon.
Should the story focus more on or the party atmosphere ?
Elias pulled a small, worn notebook from his pocket. On the first page of the new year, he didn't write a long list of resolutions. Instead, he wrote one word in bold, gold ink:
The clock tower in the center of the city hummed with a heavy, rhythmic pulse, counting down the final seconds of December. On the top floor of a nearby high-rise, Elias stood by the floor-to-ceiling windows, his reflection caught in the dark glass. Behind him, the party was a blur of gold confetti and soft jazz, but his eyes were fixed on the horizon.
